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Too Much Repetition…Plot, Character, and Gorgeousness of Hero
I found this book repetitious in too many ways, so much that it actually hampered my enjoyment of the story. There was repetition in the plot; there seemed to be a rehashing of the same points over and over without escalating complications. The characters were stuck in their own repetitive loops. Ben seemed to constantly beat himself up over his past, and the heroine did the same with hers as well. They were both so stuck in their respective pasts that their forward motion of their story arcs was missing. I also was annoyed by the repetitious nature of the comments of all the women about how gorgeous Ben was. Yeah, we get it, he’s the hottest thing since the invention of fire; say it once or twice only, please, as it gets stale pretty quick.